Tuesday, March 22, 2011

zindagi hai pattey ki tarah

Trying my hand at hindi poetry for the first time.... :P

yeh zindagi hai pattey ki tarah,
hawa na ura le jaye, dekho zara
jis tehni pey hai leh raha rahi,
uska daaman na chhootey dekho zara.

thandi tez hawa chali lubhaney,
aur mohh mey patta bhi chatpatane laga,
rookhi sookhi tehni mey kya hai rakha,
socha nayi zindagi dekhu toh zara.

phir chorh diya jab us tehni ka aanchal,
aur tez hawa mey mast behney laga,
na koi bandish, na khushi ki seema,
na kisi ki chinta, na khayal zara.

phir tabhi hawa ka rukh badla,
aur diwaar se takra tab patta gira,
besahara, tarapta aakhir ye ehsaas kara,
kyu na rakha astitva ka mol zara

yeh zindagi hai pattey ki tarah,
hawa na ura le jaye, dekho zara,
jis tehni pey hai leh raha rahi,
uska daaman na chhootey dekho zara.

13 comments:

Anshul said...

Gud try bro... you hav successfully and so beautifully explained the desires and then the tragic end of a leaf..!! It is so true..

You can try poems in hindi... :)

-Anshul

Varun Jaswal said...

I second anshul's opinions. Really, try your hand at hindi poetry.

ashish goel said...

Thanks guys :)

sangeeta said...

kya baat.. kya baat.. kya baat...

Thanks nhi dhanyabad kaho ab se..

ashish goel said...

haha.. dhanyabaad to u.

Abhinav Sharma said...

shabhash danav

Devika Singh said...

I agree. 'No Strings Attached' attitude gives us all the freedom but leaves us abandoned with time.

Good write up Ashish!

ashish goel said...

well summarized, devika!

Devika Singh said...

Thanks Ashish..! It is very tough for me to write poems.. coz i tend to finish it all off in one line!.. :P :D

ashish goel said...

@devika: i dont agree, i hav read one of ur poems... and it was beautiful and definitely more than one line :P

ashish goel said...

@Abhinav: thanks danav :)

Sushant said...

very well written sir ....
feel of it is just awesome ....

ashish goel said...

Thanks dude :)