Trying my hand at hindi poetry for the first time.... :P
yeh zindagi hai pattey ki tarah,
hawa na ura le jaye, dekho zara
jis tehni pey hai leh raha rahi,
uska daaman na chhootey dekho zara.
thandi tez hawa chali lubhaney,
aur mohh mey patta bhi chatpatane laga,
rookhi sookhi tehni mey kya hai rakha,
socha nayi zindagi dekhu toh zara.
phir chorh diya jab us tehni ka aanchal,
aur tez hawa mey mast behney laga,
na koi bandish, na khushi ki seema,
na kisi ki chinta, na khayal zara.
phir tabhi hawa ka rukh badla,
aur diwaar se takra tab patta gira,
besahara, tarapta aakhir ye ehsaas kara,
kyu na rakha astitva ka mol zara
yeh zindagi hai pattey ki tarah,
hawa na ura le jaye, dekho zara,
jis tehni pey hai leh raha rahi,
uska daaman na chhootey dekho zara.
13 comments:
Gud try bro... you hav successfully and so beautifully explained the desires and then the tragic end of a leaf..!! It is so true..
You can try poems in hindi... :)
-Anshul
I second anshul's opinions. Really, try your hand at hindi poetry.
Thanks guys :)
kya baat.. kya baat.. kya baat...
Thanks nhi dhanyabad kaho ab se..
haha.. dhanyabaad to u.
shabhash danav
I agree. 'No Strings Attached' attitude gives us all the freedom but leaves us abandoned with time.
Good write up Ashish!
well summarized, devika!
Thanks Ashish..! It is very tough for me to write poems.. coz i tend to finish it all off in one line!.. :P :D
@devika: i dont agree, i hav read one of ur poems... and it was beautiful and definitely more than one line :P
@Abhinav: thanks danav :)
very well written sir ....
feel of it is just awesome ....
Thanks dude :)
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